 deeper and deeper the heart of the lily unfolds  looking for the secret of nature - show me your fragrance  |
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deeper and deeper
the heart of the lily
unfolds
eagerly expecting
a welcomed visitor
Vic Gendrano
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. My Kannon Lily, 2005 .
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Gabi san,
I took the liberty of adding two lines to your haiku.
deeper and deeper
the heart of the lily
unfolds
eagerly expecting
a welcomed visitor
Vic Gendrano
Dear Vic,
how very lovely ...
Thanks you so much !
GABI
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I absolutely love the first one here, Gabi, thanks for sharing.... D.
beautiful and memorable
rw
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