7/21/2006

Lily with visitor

  







deeper and deeper
the heart of the lily
unfolds








looking for
the secret of nature -
show me your fragrance











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deeper and deeper
the heart of the lily
unfolds
eagerly expecting
a welcomed visitor

Vic Gendrano

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. My Kannon Lily, 2005 .

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4 comments:

Vic Gendrano said...

Gabi san,

I took the liberty of adding two lines to your haiku.

deeper and deeper
the heart of the lily
unfolds
eagerly expecting
a welcomed visitor

Vic Gendrano

. Gabi Greve said...

Dear Vic,
how very lovely ...

Thanks you so much !

GABI

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Anonymous said...

I absolutely love the first one here, Gabi, thanks for sharing.... D.

Anonymous said...

beautiful and memorable

rw

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