 early morning with an aching tooth ... what a splendour !  pink autumn clouds - I blow you a kiss where ever you are     ooo ooo ooo ooo ooo ooo ooo ooo ooo the sea of clouds .. unkai .. 雲海  |
Thank you for an aching tooth, forcing me to get up early
... and NOT to miss this !
The YOU in this haiku is not directed at my human friends, mind you.
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早起きし 君、朝化粧 深山かな
getting up early
your morning makeup
deep mountains
sakuo nakamura
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pink autumn clouds -
sigh loud
as blown Gabi's kiss
hahaha, Rita
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/simply_haiku/message/16608
moment
instant
not Zen--NOW!
--sgp©2006
Gorgeous photographs Gabi.
What wonderful sweeping clouds. I can see how it inspired your haiku!
C.
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Yes, it was a rather special morning!
Thanks, C. san.
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this is sweet
kai croft
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/simply_haiku/message/16609
pink autum clouds
you are as sweet as
the one seeing you
Rita
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/simply_haiku/message/16610
an autumn wind
rustles my beard --
a smack's sound
hehe
chibi
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/cherrypoetryclub/message/28706
Wie die Wolken am Himmel.
(Danke Gabi, auch für die schönen Wolkenimpressionen)
Gasshô Mario
http://de.groups.yahoo.com/group/AntaiDo/message/503
Das einzigste dass ich darauf sagen kann ist dass ich sowohl die Haikus als die Fotos max, super finde.
Und dieses Blog bei den anderen 'favorites' gefügt habe.
ron rozendaal
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Oh 天国がやってきましたね。
素晴しい夕暮れです。
大自然には叶わない。
絵も詩も今日はお休み！！
sakuo
morning cloudscape
the newness of
another day
Gabi-sama - Ii desu yo! Really these are so great! Also thank you so much for your kind comments on my shodo! Domo arigato gozaimashita!
-Hayato
I tried reciting this ku aloud in about 5 different ways -- seriously, humorously, pensively, etc. ... all the possible interpretations ... lovely!
Ella
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Thanks Ella san!
YOU was not even intended to mean a human, but that special someone beyond the clouds ...
GABI
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i felt your kiss, Gabi san.
arigato.
salamander
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You are most welcome, Salamander san!
Come visiting soon !
GABI
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From your Haiku, I guess its autumn in your country. I smile back to you...:,,:-,
smiling broadly
mailing a dear friend
receive big hug
Adelaide Amadade Luvandale, Kenya
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Thanks so much, Adelaide san, and greetings back to you in Kenya!
GABI
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