10/25/2006

Sea of Clouds

  







early morning
with an aching tooth ...
what a splendour !








pink autumn clouds -
I blow you a kiss
where ever you are






















ooo ooo ooo ooo ooo ooo ooo ooo ooo


the sea of clouds .. unkai .. 雲海










Thank you for an aching tooth, forcing me to get up early
... and NOT to miss this !


The YOU in this haiku is not directed at my human friends, mind you.


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早起きし 君、朝化粧 深山かな

getting up early
your morning makeup
deep mountains

sakuo nakamura


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15 comments:

Anonymous said...

pink autumn clouds -
sigh loud
as blown Gabi's kiss


hahaha, Rita

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haiku cafe said...

moment
instant
not Zen--NOW!


--sgp©2006

. Gabi Greve said...

Gorgeous photographs Gabi.
What wonderful sweeping clouds. I can see how it inspired your haiku!

C.
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Yes, it was a rather special morning!
Thanks, C. san.
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Anonymous said...

this is sweet

kai croft
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Anonymous said...

pink autum clouds
you are as sweet as
the one seeing you


Rita
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/simply_haiku/message/16610

. Gabi Greve said...

an autumn wind
rustles my beard --
a smack's sound


hehe
chibi
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Anonymous said...

Wie die Wolken am Himmel.
(Danke Gabi, auch für die schönen Wolkenimpressionen)

Gasshô Mario
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Anonymous said...

Das einzigste dass ich darauf sagen kann ist dass ich sowohl die Haikus als die Fotos max, super finde.
Und dieses Blog bei den anderen 'favorites' gefügt habe.

ron rozendaal
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sakuo said...

Oh 天国がやってきましたね。
素晴しい夕暮れです。
大自然には叶わない。

絵も詩も今日はお休み!!

sakuo

Gillena Cox said...

morning cloudscape
the newness of
another day

Hayato Tokugawa said...

Gabi-sama - Ii desu yo! Really these are so great! Also thank you so much for your kind comments on my shodo! Domo arigato gozaimashita!

-Hayato

. Gabi Greve said...

I tried reciting this ku aloud in about 5 different ways -- seriously, humorously, pensively, etc. ... all the possible interpretations ... lovely!
Ella

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Thanks Ella san!

YOU was not even intended to mean a human, but that special someone beyond the clouds ...
GABI
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. Gabi Greve said...

i felt your kiss, Gabi san.
arigato.

salamander
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You are most welcome, Salamander san!
Come visiting soon !
GABI
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P said...

summer sky…
soft and pink as a
peony’s heart

Paul Hunter

. Gabi Greve said...

From your Haiku, I guess its autumn in your country. I smile back to you...:,,:-,


smiling broadly
mailing a dear friend
receive big hug

Adelaide Amadade Luvandale, Kenya
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Thanks so much, Adelaide san, and greetings back to you in Kenya!
GABI
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