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autumn colors -
a yellow butterfly
on a purple aster
Earlier on this morning, with a sea of clouds
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Gabi, the colors in ll.2-3 are not the ones l.1 led me to expect -- which makes your ku all the more effective for me.
Best, Bill
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That was just the intention, Bill !
The backdrop of my mountain is autumn colors now, but my garden, still a symphony of different colors. This year is mild and many many flowers are just spectacular. The Bees and the Butterflies are still very acitve.
Expectations are really a BAD thing, because they often make us overlook what is really in front of our noses and eyes ...
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KIGO
Autumn (aki, Japan)
. Autumn Leaves (momiji, Japan) yellow leaves, colored leaves
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thank you for your poem that has been sent from the heaven.
It is the famous terraced rice fields of West-Ohaga
sakuo.
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