6/23/2006

Fireflies






chasing fireflies <>
all I catch is
haiku






We drove through a very steep lonely vally, for more than 10 kilometers, pitchdark and full of fireflies. Up to the high mountain ridges they were
swirling and sparkling ...







Inspired by a ku from Robert Wison

shhhhs, let the
american poets think
it's a haiku!

Simply Haiku Forum

Aaaa, let them THINK! indeed ...


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lost souls
down by the brook
the fireflies

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fireflies cruising in
bumpy circles
Mandala Valley

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moonless night
the fireflies dancing
double shifts



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4 comments:

. Gabi Greve said...

What fun!

Sandy

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Thanks for popping in, Sandy san !

GABI

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sakuo said...

この蛍、とても新鮮です。
漢字が絵のように扱われていて、
面白い感覚です。
色の取り合わせも素敵です。

sakuo

. Gabi Greve said...

Thanks for the smile, Gabi san --
this is delightful!
And Robert's ku brought a second smile...
:~)
L.

Hi L. San,
smile is very needed these days!
I am glad you had yours!

GABI
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Anonymous said...

....
......
thinku


ai... chibi

http://groups.yahoo.com/group/cherrypoetryclub/message/27692?l=1

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