Outhouse Joy

A few bits and pieces about the cold winter :o)


cold winter night -
the way to the outhouse
soooo far
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>> Greetings from my neighbour :o)
>
Gabi

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cold winter night -
the outhouse door
frozen shut
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> :-)
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> Carole

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cold winter day -
growing older
the cat and I



cold winter night
wearing a bonnet
to keep my thoughts warm

I like this haiku very much. It made me laugh. It had a surprise ending. It painted word pictures. I believe when all these elements come together, they make a great haiku.

Berg
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/cherrypoetryclub/message/21879

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. Toilet, Outhouse (benjo, no setchin, toire) .

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