evening sunshine -
a wintersweet glows
on a bare branch
wintersweet -
looking for a right
on the wrong side
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Wintersweet (roobai) Japan 蝋梅
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Your wintersweet truly GLOWS!
GABI
-kala
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It was quite a majic moment !
GABI
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Dear Gabi san
I went to your link and saw roobai san's haiku... it is beautiful
and touches a little humor in my heart... Does roobai san
meant "light" or "right"? It is good to contrast "right"
with "wrong", but, it would be interesting if it is the trick of
the "l" in English.
Sometimes, these silly things come into my mind, to think and
hear "clouds" meaning "crowds" and "light" meaning "right"
and "collect" meaning "correct".
ai... chibi
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Good morning, Chibi san,
these little right/light flips are my revenge on the wlitten ranguage !
GABI
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