Mouse and Bread
| winter morning - the mouse nibbles my breakfast bread  Wintermorgen - die Maus knabbert mein Frü..stücksbrot |
Usually my husband bakes the bread himself, but this one was sent by a friend, full of holes ... not good to spread the butter on it for breakfast ...
so the plate with the mouse came in handy !
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posted by Gabi Greve @ 1/17/2007
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morning prayer
on my prayer rug
a mouse washes his face
[before you pray, one prerequisite is washing face hands and feet.]
ISA
http://groups.yahoo.com/group/simply_haiku/message/18103
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before sunrise,
the winter of her
last smile
robert wilson
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Gabi,
I was absolutely delighted by your nibbling mouse haiku -
and the German version has a hearty/robust quality.
--Joachim--
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Thanks a lot.
Usually my husband bakes the bread himself, but this one was sent by a friend, full of holes ... not good to spread the butter on for breakfast ...
so the plate with the mouse came in handy !
GABI
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fat mice!
a happy family fills
the plate
Hahaha... what plump little critters!! Oh please, I want some bread with butter, too, thank you.
fresh baked bread smells --
the cold kitchen warms
from the oven
ai... chibi
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Creative use of flawed bread. My little cousin used to say, "I want a fixed piece!"
Der Maus-Teller hat mir viel Spass gemacht!
Thank you, Gabi, for your mouse haiku. It made me remember something:
broken sleep -
active mice
safe in my attic
In most winters the mice run around the attic over my flat and make a lot of noise at night. As far as I can tell there is nowhere else safe that they can go.
From currently windless Germany,
Pia von Prondzynski
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Thanks Pia, and take care of the severe storm in Europe right now, not to blow the roor away above the mouse !
GABI
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Wie heißt es so schön, gemaltes Brot macht nicht satt.
Gemalte Maus wird nicht dick ;-)))
Wirklich tolles Foto, vielen Dank.
Gruß Mario
house mouse
scratching
at the fridge :)
sｺ17
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I made this one up a bit ago in reference to someone else...
You are as a mouse
tiny, lost in a tunnel
without any cheese.
(Handy when you might wish a humorous way to let someone know that they are hopelessly lost..)
Wook
Thanks for the smile, Wook!
GABI
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