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bright autumn sky -
the shadow of a hawk
in my hands
He was circling with his wife over my roof and garden, leisurely for more than half an hour. I could play with his slowly moving shadow ...
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That's lovely GABI
Here's my response. . .
winter sun –
its slow rise above
the hawk's grand swoop
Kala
The hokku from Triparshva Renku: The Hawk's Grand Swoop
First appeared in Simply Haiku - Summer 06
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Linking the two of your hawks, Kala and Gabi's, incidentally, a sparrow hawk, not very adult, has taken shelter in our garden, it's not very common here. So my Haiku as below-
Tearing the living
flesh of lizard, Sparrow Hawk
sheltering in garden.
Warmly,
Aju M, WHCindia
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Hawk, a kigo for winter
Winter Birds
but today, it was my favorite .. ten takashi .. , the bright autumn sky
Autumn Sky
Aaa, and we had an earthquake this morning, one of the rare ones in Okayama prefecture.
!!! Earthquake !!!
. My Hawk in December 2011 .
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9/26/2006
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1 comment:
this one really strikes a chord for me.
:) Billie
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