tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8669788.post113169585151420974..comments2007-04-15T20:25:34.673-07:00Gabi Grevehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16362456518166174106noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8669788.post-1132005510458690212005-11-14T13:58:00.000-08:002005-11-14T13:58:00.000-08:00here are a few of my autumn leaves haiku, previously published:<BR/><BR/><B>a golden leaf<BR/>settles<BR/>on the center line<BR/><BR/>predawn footsteps<BR/>a leaf<BR/>jogs by<BR/><BR/>swirling in the dust devil<BR/>last fall's leaves<BR/>and cherry blossoms<BR/><BR/>a row of bradford pears<BR/>only one<BR/>thinks it's autumn</B><BR/><BR/>susan delphine delaney md<BR/>plano, texas<BR/><BR/>::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::. Gabi Grevehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06469970377160309143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8669788.post-1131837469681869782005-11-12T15:17:00.000-08:002005-11-12T15:17:00.000-08:00<B>Tongue sticks out:<BR/>a tricolor maple in<BR/>Prospect Park.<BR/><BR/>Autumn leaves:<BR/>are they redder this year,<BR/>or is it my eyes? </B><BR/><BR/>Kami<BR/><BR/>.. .. .. <BR/><BR/>Thanks for your haiku and take care of those eyes ...<BR/><BR/>GABI<BR/><BR/>::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::. Gabi Grevehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06469970377160309143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8669788.post-1131752067775392212005-11-11T15:34:00.000-08:002005-11-11T15:34:00.000-08:00<B>a calico carpet of leaves -- windchill <BR/>(chibi) </B><BR/><BR/>.....<BR/><BR/>Dear Gabi san<BR/><BR/>Your last poem is quite enigmantic! The color of red triggers deep and varied ques in Nature, from luck to death. If "life" were a rainbow, which color ends its spectrum?<BR/><BR/>Although, I usually think mentioning death directly in haiku is problematic, my "gut" resonates with your poem.<BR/><BR/>keigu<BR/><BR/>ai... chibi<BR/><BR/>::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::. Gabi Grevehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06469970377160309143noreply@blogger.com